i write poems during my free time but i'm never a good poet.Guess its because i'm never into literature before and studied the subj only when i'm forced too~~ :P So i hereby hope to post my latest poem here inorder to get some useful feedbacks :)
The poems i wrote are the feelings i have either by watching tv shows or inspired by the harsh reality in the world.I'm young and perhaps naive too thus my poems may sound abit ignorant to u so please bear with it :)

(b)(i)A teary clown(/i)(/b)


Smiles and laughter filled the air,
as truth untold is never shared,
the painted face that always smiles,
with teary eyes,
hidden and not found,
pieces of puzzles joined together,
the final truth will soon uncover.

A love so strong that it aches deep in,
Looking at the scene that will never become me,
A song that plays for the lonely heart,
which is always there,
For the blind to see.

Wearing a mask,
She looks ahead,
Smiling towards her prince charming,
Whom i dare say is holding on,
To the love of his life,
the beauty queen.

If I were the teary clown,
I’ll wipe off the mask which shows all smiles,
Looking ahead for my enchanted rose,
Who has eyes on me and no one else.

Bless the heaven,
He soon realize,
The bitter tears that is filled inside,
A new found love,
Slowly sips in,
Revealing the beauty that is kept unseen.

this poem is inspired by a tv show i have watched long ago.Dun ask me why i wrote it,i dun know either~~ :)
btw,i have more poems actually bt i got a feeling my bro has deleted it cos i cant't find it anymore after the reboot of the computer~~ i hope i'm wrong bt~~well the only poems i miss is Sticky candy and another incomplete poems i started long ago~~so sad~~